Oke, omdat ik dus echt niet normaal slecht ben in Engels en deze drie random stukjes tijdens de Engelse les moest schrijven, vroeg ik me af of er veel fouten in staan en dan ook welke. Want no way dat ik zoiets aan mijn Engels leraar ga vragen, hij is gewoon een creep. Wel aardig, maar gewoon raar soms
Dus.. Zou iemand eventueel de fouten er uit kunnen halen? Grammatica en alles dus eah..
Sorry als dit niet de bedoeling was van dit subforum, maar ik dacht dat dit wel mocht?
Ik heb de naam Niall gebruikt want ik wist geen andere :/
He laid his hand on my shoulder, I turned on and looked in his ice blue eyes. “What’s the matter, Niall?” He seemed a little bit confused and said nothing. “Niall?”
“I’m sorry. I can’t do this anymore.”
Three months later and I never heard something from him again. He just disappeared; no one knew where he was. I didn’t know what to do, it felt like it was all my fault. And I think that’s true, I think it was my fault. If I didn’t tell him what happened in the past, he would never know and he wouldn’t give a shit. But now.. maybe it ruined his life, I didn’t know.. I still don't know.
I had to go and find him. But where should’ve I started? Maybe he wasn’t still alive, maybe it killed him.
If he was still alive.. I’ve had to go and save him.
“Skye! Go away, now!” He pushed me away, I fell on the ground. It did hurt. “You really have to go.”
“Why?” I asked him, “What’s going on?”
He ignored my question. “Go, now!”
I wanted to ask again why I had to do that, then I heard a terrible noise. It scared me. “What was that?” I looked around, but I didn’t see anything. The fog made sure that there was nothing to see. “Niall?”
A loud scream, creepy noises. “Niall? Where are you!”
And then I saw it. His black, empty eyes. The blood that was all over his body. His teeth that came closer and closer.. He growled and then attacked me. Niall shouted my name, but it was too late. I was dead.